[Unlock Answer From @10/Pg] Condense Short Paper 1

 I have attached the requirements in the document. Be sure to use the text that is given in the attached file. I received a C from you guys on short paper 1 and need to get an A on the full paper 1. I put down the feed back that he has given me from short paper one. Also be sure to condense short paper 1 like asked in the directions with the changes made from his feed back.